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Jennifer Degani's avatar

This piece pulled me in right away. I was so worried for Maria (great that you chose a variation of Mary to complete the broken trio) and the stakes were so high even before she saw the open hotel door. Amazing job.

Sara Bannerman's avatar

So good, Rachael! I was locked in for this.

Tonia Gutting's avatar

Feeling the tension!

Alison Vogel's avatar

I loved this story. Great tension, palpable love, and all the right sorts of surprises.

Lyndie Blevins's avatar

Great to see this story again. Congratulations

Holly Schurter's avatar

What a great story, Rachael!!